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Dear Mrs Sailkhanova Im writing you to enquire about taking Russian lessons with you.

Dear Mrs Sailkhanova Im writing you to enquire about taking Russian lessons with you. OgkR7

I came across the advertisement in the local newspaper a day before. I hope that you are just the person I am looking for. I am particularly keen to study from a native speaker like yourself so I believe that I can learn language which I want for a long time. My reason for learning your language is because I will be visiting to Moscow for two years working there in "Sushi work" company. I really want to be able to work and talk to the customers and understand them easily. I would be thankful if you could let me what available you have. Three time a week could be comfort and ideal for me if you agree. I work at school from early morning till noon, so in the evenings would be great. Please, could you also tell me what you charge for lessons and how long each lesson would last. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfullySvetlana Abdullayevna

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faithfullySvetlana
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