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Dealing with Stress

Dealing with Stress OMP0y
Almost all people in the world suffer from stress, because the modern life is full of difficulties. People have different ways of escaping this stress. Some read, some exercise, others listen to music. In my opinion, regular exercise and hobbies are the best ways to alleviate physical and mental stress. I think that the main benefit of exercise is that it helps you relax physically and helps loosen up your muscles and at the same time it also serves as a distraction from one’s stressful life. Having a hobby is also important. Many studies have shown that joining a club related to your hobby and socializing with people who share your interests can also contribute to the alleviation of stress. Escaping from the cause of stress also helps people to relieve their stress. Since stress come from an ordinary and boring lifestyle like continuous work or studies, if we escape from stress, we can get rid of stress. Undoubtedly, travel would be the best way to reduce stress. Lastly, having a good night’s sleep is the best way to relax yourself provided you do it right. To sum up, relieving stress is a necessity of each and every person and the way which proves the most effective differs from person to person and from situation to situation.
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read,
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exercise, others listen to music. In my opinion, regular exercise and hobbies are the best
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ways
to alleviate physical and mental
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stress
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that the main benefit of exercise is that it
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people
who share your interests can
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stress
. Escaping from the cause of
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from an ordinary and boring lifestyle like continuous work or studies, if we escape from
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stress
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, having a
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night’s sleep is the best
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way
to relax yourself provided you do it right.

To sum up, relieving
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stress
is a necessity of each and every person and the
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which proves the most effective differs from person to person and from situation to situation.
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IELTS essay Dealing with Stress

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
217 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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