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The plan illustrate layout of university department in year 2000 and how it was developed in year 2015. Overall, university department became much bigger with additional seminar rooms and parking space. Starting from the year 2000, there were total three seminar rooms (S1, S2, and S3). Office and library were next to each other, on the right of the main entrance. There was a main corridor which separates one building into two parts. Moving forward to changes in the year 2015, old library space combined with the office area and there was an addition of new building for library area with new facility of IT centre in garden area. Old university department building expanded and introduced two new seminar rooms (S4 and S5). Also, new car parking facility introduced in year 2015 just near main entrance. Finally, there were no change in old seminar rooms and main entrance but as building expanded, its collider also extend.
The plan illustrate layout of university department in
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year
2000 and how it
was developed
in
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year
2015.

Overall
, university department became much bigger with additional
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seminar
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rooms
and parking space.

Starting from the
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year
2000, there were total three
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seminar
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rooms
(S1, S2, and S3). Office and library were
next
to each other, on the right of the
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main
entrance. There was a
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main
corridor which separates one
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building
into two parts.

Moving forward to
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changes
in the
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year
2015,
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old
library space combined with the office area and there was an addition of
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new
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building
for library area with
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new
facility of IT
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
in garden area.
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Old
university department
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building
expanded and introduced two
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new
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seminar
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rooms
(S4 and S5).
Also
,
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new
car parking facility introduced in
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year
2015
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just
near
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main
entrance.
Finally
, there were no
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change
in
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old
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seminar
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rooms
and
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main
entrance
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but
as
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building
expanded, its collider
also
extend.

IELTS essay das dasd sd assad adasd asdsadas dasd sa sdasd asdasda

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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