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Doing homework should be mandatory because it helps to retain knowledge students have learnt at school. To what extend do you agree?

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The topic of homework has always been controversial and ambivalent. Therefore, there are various opinions and one of them is that home task should be obligatory because it is a crucial aspect of maintaining beneficial information which was obtained by students at school. Frankly speaking, I agree with this statement and in this essay would like to substantiate my point of view Firstly, home task provides the opportunity to reiterate received knowledge by implementing certain tasks. Moreover, it is a great capacity to deal with obscure stuff by yourself. For example, I read the article a few days ago which is said that according to scientific research the most helpful way to keep the knowledge in mind is by repeating the information in the form of complicated exercises which burden people’s brain. Secondly, there are different cases in which apprentices can not digest the full amount of information such as lack of time because in the majority of schools lesson lasts approximately 40 minutes or poor quality of teaching. For instance, in seventh grade, I had a math teacher who just graduated from University and did not have proper work experience with children. It was near impossible to understand his explanations. However, homework and independent studying assisted me to figure out and learn the basics of mathematics. In conclusion, I would like to say that home task should be a mandatory part of pupils’ studying path. The reason is that it enables them to retain the full amount of knowledge
The topic of homework has always been controversial and ambivalent.
Therefore
, there are various opinions and one of them is that home
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task
should be obligatory
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because
it is a crucial aspect of maintaining beneficial information which
was obtained
by students at school.
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agree
with this statement and in this essay would like to substantiate my point of
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Firstly
, home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
provides the opportunity to reiterate received knowledge by implementing certain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tasks
.
Moreover
, it is a great capacity to deal with obscure stuff by yourself.
For example
, I read the article a few days ago which
is said
that according to scientific research the most helpful way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the knowledge in mind is by repeating the information in the form of complicated exercises which burden
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
’s brain.

Secondly
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
cases in which apprentices can not digest the full amount of information such as lack of time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in the majority of schools lesson lasts approximately 40 minutes or poor quality of teaching.
For instance
, in seventh grade, I had a math teacher who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
graduated from University and did not have proper work experience with children. It was near impossible to understand his explanations.
However
, homework and independent studying assisted me to figure out and learn the basics of mathematics.

In conclusion
, I would like to say that home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
task
should be a mandatory part of pupils’ studying path. The reason is that it enables them to retain the full amount of
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
knowledge
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IELTS essay Doing homework should be mandatory because it helps to retain knowledge students have learnt at school.

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