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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places and how to increase its popularity? v.3

Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places and how to increase its popularity? v. 3
There is sufficient evidence to infer that bicycles have more positive impact on the environment than other means of transports, but it fails to gain popularity in several countries. This trend is resulted by a myriad of reasons and it should be tackled by numerous effective solutions from both individuals and the society. There are certain reasons why travellers are more likely to use modern vehicles such as the car or other public transport than bicycles. The primary reason is that using bikes can consume a great deal of time as well as be more physically demanding than driving other types of transports. For example, this eco-friendly vehicle is not given priority for those who are involved in manual work because it is a necessity for them to save energy for certain valuable aspects of their life. Furthermore, it is undeniable that those having business in far distance certainly do not use bicycles due to several negative features of them. While bicycles can bring incredible advantageous impacts on the environment, citizens seem to need convenient and flexible vehicles more than this simple transport. Fortunately, several measures could be taken by preventing this problem. One simple solution is that bicycle manufacturers should elevate certain specific features of bicycles, which can eclipse the disadvantage of this type of transport. To be more specific, the inventor can apply the current technology to facilitate the bicycles such as alternative energy, which can make a contribution to raising the using bicycle rate. In addition, it is necessary to assist people all over the world would realise how important forming a habit of cycling is. No sooner do cyclists take into consideration to using the bicycle on a daily basis than they have a golden opportunity to improve their health and enhance their body resistant. This solution could be done by getting people involved the international campaign such as riding bicycle competition as well as the monthly green days. In conclusion, it is clear that there are a number of reasons why bicycles are used unpopularly and there are appropriate steps to solve this controversial problem.
There is sufficient evidence to infer that
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bicycles
have more
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positive
impact on the environment than other means of
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transports
,
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but
it fails to gain popularity in several countries. This trend
is resulted
by a myriad of
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reasons
and it should
be tackled
by numerous effective solutions from both individuals and the society.

There are certain
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reasons
why
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travellers
are more likely to
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use
modern vehicles such as the car or other public
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transport
than
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bicycles
. The primary
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reason
is that using bikes can consume a great deal of time
as well
as be more
physically
demanding than driving other types of
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transports
.
For example
, this eco-friendly vehicle is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
priority for those who
are involved
in manual work
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because
it is a necessity for them to save energy for certain valuable aspects of their life.
Furthermore
, it is undeniable that those having business in far distance
certainly
do not
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use
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bicycles
due to several
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negative
features of them. While
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bicycles
can bring incredible advantageous impacts on the environment, citizens seem to need convenient and flexible vehicles more than this simple transport.

Fortunately
, several measures could
be taken
by preventing this problem. One simple solution is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycle
manufacturers should elevate certain specific features of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bicycles
, which can eclipse the disadvantage of this type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
transport
. To be more specific, the inventor can apply the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
technology to facilitate the
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bicycles
such as alternative energy, which can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a contribution to raising the using
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bicycle
rate.
In addition
, it is necessary to assist
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people
all over the world would
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realise
how
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important
forming a habit of cycling is. No sooner do cyclists take into consideration to using the
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bicycle
on a daily basis than they have a golden opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their health and enhance their body resistant. This solution could
be done
by getting
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people
involved the international campaign such as riding
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bicycle
competition
as well
as the monthly green days.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that there are a number of
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reasons
why
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bicycles
are
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used
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unpopularly
and there are appropriate steps to solve this controversial problem.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places and how to increase its popularity? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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