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Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests. v.5

Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests. v. 5
An incomparable shadow of death loom over the nature in form of deforestation which is despite the awareness and protection scheme launched by regime, burgeoning at vision blurring pace. One common causes behind such phenomenon is the population burst giving rise to various other factors. There is no skepticism related to profits gained for cutting down of forests as this open up various opportunities for the humans to build homes, industries, road and many other things on the areas which have been cleared out of trees, plants. Yet despite everything, these are also the most contributing factor toward the deforestation. A red thread which link all the facets in a cluster is known as population which is despite many control efforts, burgeoning at exponential rate. Although technology is also held responsible for such disaster but when compared to population boom, it seems a minor part of the big universe. According to the World Population Clock, every year populace increases nearby 1% which by current estimates measure up to 82 million people. In consensus of this, demands of food, wood, land also rise to accommodate which, forests are chopped down. Even though this is considered a major factor toward increasing global warming, however, as trees in forest only provide 28% oxygen of the globe, hence, the malady does not arise from deforestation rather by the bursts in population. On the contrary, soil erosion is main problem arising out of cleaning of forests, even though, it mostly occurs on ground slopes and in the fields. Before hammering the pin on the table, it is not wrong to ascertain that reducing number of trees may be a major threat to environment, nevertheless, it is not something that cannot be curbed despite the process being tedious and difficult. Nor does it imply that life will cease to exist altogether without forests.
An incomparable shadow of death loom over the nature in form of deforestation which is despite the awareness and protection scheme launched by regime, burgeoning at vision blurring pace. One common causes behind such phenomenon is the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
burst giving rise to various other factors.

There is no skepticism related to profits gained for cutting down of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forests
as this open up various opportunities for the humans to build homes, industries, road and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other things on the areas which have
been cleared
out of trees, plants.

Yet
despite everything, these are
also
the most contributing factor toward the deforestation. A red thread which link all the facets in a cluster
is known
as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
which is despite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
control efforts, burgeoning at exponential rate. Although technology is
also
held responsible for such disaster
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
when compared to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
boom, it seems a minor part of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
universe. According to the World
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Population
Clock, every year populace increases nearby 1% which by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
estimates measure up to 82 million
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. In consensus of this, demands of food, wood, land
also
rise to accommodate which,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forests
are chopped
down.

Even though
this
is considered
a major factor toward increasing global warming,
however
, as trees in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
provide 28% oxygen of the globe,
hence
, the malady does not arise from deforestation
rather
by the bursts in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
population
.
On the contrary
, soil erosion is main problem arising out of cleaning of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forests
,
even though
, it
mostly
occurs on ground slopes and in the fields.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Before
hammering the pin on the table, it is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
to ascertain that reducing number of trees may be a major threat to environment,
nevertheless
, it is not something that cannot
be curbed
despite the process being tedious and difficult. Nor does it imply that life will cease to exist altogether without
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
forests
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests. v. 5

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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