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Customer service is the most important part of a successful business, To what extent to you agree or disagree?

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In current times, the customer service industry is focusing on strong development and this is considered the most important key in building a successful business. It is worth highlighting that in the age of digital transformation, customer service requires not only doing what the customer asks but also understanding and empathizing with the customer. All successful businesses support good customer service foster loyalty and positive reviews from customers. My essay will demonstrate why offering good customer service is the greatest approach to generate economic value and profits, and it will then give ways for delivering amazing customer service.
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industry is focusing on strong development and this
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key in building a successful business. It is worth highlighting that in the age of digital transformation,
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customer
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requires not
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doing what the
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asks
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also
understanding and empathizing with the
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customer
. All successful businesses support
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good
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customer
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foster loyalty and
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positive
reviews from
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customers
. My essay will demonstrate why offering
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good
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customer
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is the greatest approach to generate economic value and profits, and it will then give ways for delivering amazing
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customer
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IELTS essay Customer service is the most important part of a successful business,

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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