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do you prefer to get the news from newspaper/ facebook?

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I enjoy reading online newspapers, particularly on Facebook or other online publications. Because it is up-to-the-minute information and I may be accessed at any time with only a smartphone with Internet connectivity. Reading news online, as opposed to reading paper newspapers, allows you to view photos and videos that are vibrant, real, and make the news much more emotive. Furthermore, any news may go viral in a matter of seconds, I can immediately communicate that news with my family and friends. However, there is a minor drawback in that certain internet news is not properly controlled by the editor and may have a detrimental effect on the private lives of some innocent individuals. As a result, when it comes to following news online, we must constantly be cautious and careful.
I enjoy reading
online
newspapers,
particularly
on Facebook or other
online
publications.
Because
it is up-to-the-minute information and I may
be accessed
at any time with
only
a smartphone with Internet connectivity. Reading
news
online
, as opposed to reading paper newspapers,
allows
you to view photos and videos that are vibrant, real, and
make
the
news
much more emotive.
Furthermore
, any
news
may go viral in a matter of seconds, I can immediately communicate that
news
with my family and friends.
However
, there is a minor drawback in that certain internet
news
is not
properly
controlled by the editor and may have a detrimental effect on the private
lives
of
some
innocent individuals.
As a result
, when it
comes
to following
news
online
, we
must
constantly
be cautious and careful.
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IELTS essay do you prefer to get the news from newspaper/ facebook?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
130 words
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