Crime rates in cities continues to a problem. rWhat are the reason for this? What problems might this cause? v.1
Crime rates in cities continues to a problem. rWhat are the reason for this? What problems might this cause? v. 1
Technology is playing a vital role in every sphere of human life. It is controversial that whether people are getting more social or less social by connecting with modern devices. From my perspective, it is a true fact that science and automation helps individual to interact with myriads of people, however, rarely people met face- to –face which is considered the minimum level of socialization.
First and Foremost, modern technology focuses on different types of gadgets such as the internet, smart phone, laptop, and so on, to name but a few. This, invariably, vouchsafes people to communicate with the unknown. For example, in smart phone, people have Facebook software through which it has been estimated that people are linking themselves with 5 billion people around the world. If such up-to-date machine had not invented, it was quite impossible to socialize themselves. Moreover, people use e- commerce sites for ordering their necessities and pay bills online with a click on the button. Therefore, since technology invents plethora of devices which helps even common people to connect with their kith and kin, beside the necessities of lives.
On the contrary, even these devices reduce face-to-face contact with near and dear ones. Besides that, people discover that it is unimportant to collect anything through vis-à-vis communication. This is because, if a person is ordering something, it is coming within a day without any hassles of traffic jam and bargaining about that product. For that reason, people are indifferent to meet other people for executing any tasks, as a result, they are not explicitly socializing themselves even being the authority of the house or office. Ergo, 5G internet with smart devices deducts the connection skill with face-to-face which leads to less interaction with people.
In conclusion, although science and technology have given lots of modern equipment which makes people socialize with limited perspectives of life, vis-à-vis communication has been reduced diametrically in recent time. From my opinion, the less people will interact with people, the less people will socialize.
Technology
is playing a vital role in every sphere of human life. It is controversial that whether
people
are getting more social or
less
social by connecting with modern
devices
. From my perspective, it is a true fact that science and automation
helps
individual to interact with myriads of
people
,
however
, rarely
people
met face- to –face which
is considered
the minimum level of socialization.
First
and Foremost, modern
technology
focuses on
different
types of gadgets such as the internet, smart phone, laptop, and
so
on, to name
but
a few. This,
invariably
, vouchsafes
people
to communicate with the unknown.
For example
, in smart phone,
people
have Facebook software through which it has
been estimated
that
people
are linking themselves with 5 billion
people
around the world. If such up-to-date machine had not invented, it was quite impossible to socialize themselves.
Moreover
,
people
use
e- commerce sites for ordering their necessities and pay bills online with a click on the button.
Therefore
, since
technology
invents plethora of
devices
which
helps
even common
people
to connect with their kith and kin, beside the necessities of
lives
.
On the contrary
, even these
devices
reduce
face-to-face contact with near and dear ones.
Besides
that,
people
discover that it is unimportant to collect anything through vis-à-vis communication. This is
because
, if a person is ordering something, it is coming within a day without any hassles of traffic jam and bargaining about that product. For that reason,
people
are indifferent to
meet
other
people
for executing any tasks,
as a result
, they are not
explicitly
socializing themselves even being the authority of the
house
or office. Ergo, 5G internet with smart
devices
deducts the connection
skill
with face-to-face which leads to
less
interaction with
people
.
In conclusion
, although science and
technology
have
given
lots of modern equipment which
makes
people
socialize with limited perspectives of life, vis-à-vis communication has been
reduced
diametrically
in recent time. From my opinion, the
less
people
will interact with
people
, the
less
people
will socialize.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes