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Crime novels and TV shows are geting popular this days

Crime novels and TV shows are geting popular this days jdAJ8
Modern world is upgrading each day with something new in market. Technologies advancement in recent times have increased the reach of people in various sectors. One of the many is entertainment sector. For example in novels and television business, the consumers are different for every genre so massive amount of content is produced to target and satisfy everyone. Currently crime novels are bestsellers and TV crime dramas gets best ratings. Popularity of these books and tv shows is because of the ultimate experience they provide while reading and watching. Viewer gets hinged to the content, as he consider himself in the shoe of the main character. Consider it like real life experience due to the excellent cinematography. This dark mystery shows have became a source of knowledge for the budding generation. Advertisement of the content plays vital role in the popularity of this shows. Recent popular show game of thrones is apt for an example. They used every possible way to attract viewers for their history drama. Hired actors for the show which already have mass popularity. Every viewer gets inside the skin of his/her favourite character. Later they will argue on each other’s skills and importance. Advertisement of the show on social media was awesomely executed. My opinion on this matter is that popularity of this type of genre is good but they are affecting young children minds. Content what are shown is not advisory to watch without parental guidance. One should not get manipulated to read or watch something if that’s not interesting.
Modern world is upgrading each day with something new in market. Technologies

advancement in recent times have increased the reach of
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people
in various sectors.

One of the
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many
is entertainment sector.
For example
in novels and television business, the

consumers are
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different
for every genre
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so
massive amount of
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content
is produced
to target

and satisfy everyone.
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Currently
crime novels are bestsellers and TV crime dramas
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gets best


ratings.

Popularity of these books and
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tv
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shows
is
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because
of the ultimate experience they provide

while reading and watching. Viewer
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gets
hinged to the
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content
, as he
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consider
himself in the

shoe of the main character. Consider it like real life experience due to the excellent

cinematography. This dark mystery
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shows
have
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became
a source of knowledge for the

budding generation.
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Advertisement of
the
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content
plays vital role in the popularity of this

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shows
.

Recent popular
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show
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game of thrones
is apt for an example. They
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used
every possible way

to attract viewers for their history drama. Hired actors for the
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show
which already have

mass popularity. Every viewer
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gets
inside the skin of his/her
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favourite
character. Later they

will argue on each other’s
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skills
and importance.
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Advertisement of
the
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show
on social media

was
awesomely
executed.

My opinion on this matter is that popularity of this type of genre is
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good
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they are

affecting young children minds.
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Content
what
are shown
is not advisory to
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watch
without

parental guidance. One should not
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get
manipulated to read or
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watch
something if that’s not

interesting.
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IELTS essay Crime novels and TV shows are geting popular this days

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
255 words
5.5
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