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Education in past and education in the future

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Technology has certainly evolved at an exponential rate in the last few years, especially in the field of education. Just less than 30 years ago, you had to visit the library for encyclopedias to write a paper, and those had to be done by hand. There are people alive that still remember using chalkboards in class, or writing on slates at their desk. Now, we have all the information about the world in the palm of our hands, readily available, and people can collaborate with others from across the globe on a variety of projects. Our way of education is changing and so are our tools; Robots are becoming part of the classroom environment. There will be even bigger changes in the future Today, there's lots of would be students out there who aren't able to take part in traditional schooling. This can be for a few reasons, such as living in remote locations, living with disabilities. There's lots of ways already being developed to help these students get back in touch with learning. The use of technology means it will become easier for teachers to create more diverse learning materials, to suit the needs of students with disabilities. As you can see, technology will soon truly make education accessible for all. More and more educators are realising that classroom based learning isn't the whole picture when it comes to education. In the future, we're going to see much less classroom learning and more 'hands on' activities, allowing pupils to really get to grips with their subjects. Learning at a desk is great for the basics, but students really begin to develop skills when they're asked to apply them to real life situations. That's why project based learning will become much more important in the future. Schools in the future will be places where regardless of a person’s background or academic performance, will be treated equally. Where humans and technology become best friends and curriculums that bolster entrepreneurship and innovation since the very beginning of a student’s educational journey. As you can see, there's a lot of changes that are coming in the next 50 years. A mixture of new technology and changes in strategy will mean a much more rewarding experience for teachers and students alike. No one will have to miss out on an education, and students are much more likely to enjoy learning as a result.
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, or writing on slates at their desk.
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Now
, we have all the information about the world in the palm of our hands,
readily
available, and
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people
can collaborate with others from across the globe on a variety of projects. Our way of
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education
is changing and
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so
are our tools; Robots are becoming part of the classroom environment. There will be even bigger
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changes
in the future

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, there's lots of would be
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students
out there who aren't able to
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take part
in traditional schooling. This can be for a few reasons, such as living in remote locations, living with disabilities. There's lots of ways already
being developed
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help
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students
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technology
means it will become easier for teachers to create more diverse
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materials, to suit the needs of
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students
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education
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learning
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education
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much
less classroom
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learning
and more 'hands on' activities, allowing pupils to
really
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get
to grips with their subjects.

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students
really
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begin
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skills
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much
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important
in the future.

Schools in the future will be places where regardless of a person’s background or academic performance, will
be treated
equally
. Where humans and
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technology
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friends and curriculums that bolster entrepreneurship and innovation since the
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beginning of a
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see
, there's
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a lot of
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changes
that are coming in the
next
50 years. A mixture of new
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technology
and
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changes
in strategy will mean a
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much
more rewarding experience for teachers and
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students
alike. No one will
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have to
miss out on an
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education
, and
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much
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learning
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IELTS essay Education in past and education in the future

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
399 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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