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Crime fiction and TV shows

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The importance of the crime fiction and TV dramas which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion these books and shows was appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion. Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is that more people follow their idol especially film stars, they thus follow their wrong moves in real life and put themselves in threat. Another striking negative impact is that more and more citizens know the idea of robbery and to escape successfully by see their stories. Probing ahead one of the main underlying reasons stem from the fact that these shows are becoming more and more popular, show interest in them. Moving further it is pertinent to mention that these activities polish their skills to rob the bank and to make people fool easily. Apart from the reason mentioned above it can be clearly stated that why many are not in favour of this trend. The drawbacks of digital crime pictures and plays are indeed dire to ignore.
The importance of the crime fiction and TV dramas which was always debatable has
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now
become more controversial with
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many
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people
claiming that it is beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion these books and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
was appears to be more rational. This essay will
further
elaborate my views for
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favouring
the
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negative
impact of this trend and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Analysing
the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
and foremost reason behind this is that more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
follow their idol
especially
film stars, they
thus
follow their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moves
in real life and put themselves in threat. Another striking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact is that more and more citizens know the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
of robbery and to escape
successfully
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
their stories.

Probing ahead one of the main underlying reasons stem from the fact that these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
are becoming more and more popular,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
interest in them. Moving
further
it is pertinent to mention that these activities polish their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to rob the bank and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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people
fool
easily
. Apart from the reason mentioned above it can be
clearly
stated that why
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many
are not in
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favour
of this trend.

The drawbacks of digital crime pictures and plays are
indeed
dire to
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ignore
.
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IELTS essay Crime fiction and TV shows

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
226 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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