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I’m a big fan of music, I have been listening to music for 4 years.

I’m a big fan of music, I have been listening to music for 4 years. k6YEM
My favorite singer Son Tung is a talented singer with a voice full of wonder and fascination. He is a very handsome singer, not only has domestic fans but also a lot of foreign fans. He has a lot of top-notch songs, some with a gentle, chill melody but some fast beats that make me want to be danceable when I listen to him. The lyrics of each song are meaningful, sometimes about love, sometimes about family feelings. I have been on Sky Tour 2019 and bought a lot of his albums. When he composes a new song, I will watch youtube many times to plow his views. He is an affectionate, friendly person with colleagues and fans. I usually listen to music when I'm sad or having problems. I feel down, it helps someone unwind. Also, I listen to them in the morning, it makes me feel that the day is full of energy. Music makes my life more beautiful, I love music.
My favorite singer Son
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Tung
is a talented singer with a voice full of wonder and fascination. He is a
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handsome singer, not
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has domestic fans
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foreign fans. He has
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with a gentle, chill melody
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beats that
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me want to be danceable when I listen to him. The lyrics of each song are meaningful,
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about
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about family feelings. I have been on Sky Tour 2019 and
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a lot of
his albums. When he composes a new song, I will
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watch
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youtube
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times to plow his views.

He is an affectionate, friendly person with colleagues and fans. I
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listen to music when I'm sad or having problems. I feel down, it
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helps
someone unwind.
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, I listen to them in the morning, it
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my life more
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IELTS essay I’m a big fan of music, I have been listening to music for 4 years.

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