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Covid Passport, what is it and why is it important

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Proof for vaccination or recovery from the infection is increasingly being demanded, not only for international travel but also for a domestic commute. The first World health organization international vaccination certificate was issued in 1951. This was also known as the yellow card. So what is this covid passport? The covid passport implies that these will be a part of the required document for international as well as domestic travel. Some countries have digital vaccination certificates which provide information on vaccination or recovery from infections. These may also provide a negative test of medical exemption in some cases. This approach has led to a safer congregation and spur the positivity for vaccination in the country. Most of them feel this is a short inconvenience to future travel freedom. While some think of it as a threat to civil liberties, misuse of data, and resentment towards pressure to get vaccinated and share medical information.

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IELTS essay Covid Passport, what is it and why is it important

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American English

3 paragraphs

153 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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