Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.6
Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. v. 6
Logically, it is true that if people work more than average workday, so the more they contribute to the country's economy, compared to those who work less. However, this fact mismatch with reality. Therefore, I certainly disagree that governments gain more taxes and increase the state's budget if only they extend the workday for its citizens.
First of all, the long working day is not enough if doesn't use effective management. Thus, increasing of working time is not useful without the use of new technologies, process automation and management strategies. To illustrate, take the economic level of North Korea. It is widely known that North Korea's population is considered as most working population of the Earth, given that an average working day there lasts for 9 hours. However we hardly can say that this country advanced economically.
Moreover, even working half a day some countries achieve high progress. Usage of the newest technologies, research and development, effective administration of the daily routines get some regions to the top in the worldwide economic ratings. For example Silicon Valley near the San-Francisco, forty percent of global wealth accumulates in this small area. While people here don't have even an office schedule. Despite their work whenever they want and how long they want the results of their job is hard to overestimate. As a result, we again see here that working duration has nothing in common with increasing some governments budget or populations financial assets.
In conclusion, certainly, countries with longer average working terms are not specifically competitive economically, in contrast, countries with less than average working time can be high level players. In other words, any country who aims to have a mature economical condition has to look for any solutions except of adding working hours.
Logically
, it is true that if
people
work more than
average
workday,
so
the more they contribute to the country's economy, compared to those who work less.
However
, this fact mismatch with reality.
Therefore
, I
certainly
disagree that
governments
gain more taxes and increase the state's budget if
only
they extend the workday for its citizens.
First of all
, the long
working
day is not
enough
if doesn't
use
effective management.
Thus
, increasing of
working
time is not useful without the
use
of new technologies, process automation and management strategies. To illustrate, take the economic level of North Korea. It is
widely
known that North Korea's population
is considered
as most
working
population of the Earth,
given
that an
average
working
day there lasts for 9 hours.
However
we hardly can say that this
country
advanced
economically
.
Moreover
, even
working
half a day
some
countries
achieve high progress. Usage of the newest technologies, research and development, effective administration of the daily routines
get
some
regions to the top in the worldwide economic ratings.
For example
Silicon Valley near the San-Francisco, forty percent of global wealth accumulates in this
small
area.
While
people
here don't have even an office schedule. Despite their work whenever they want and how long they want the results of their job is
hard
to overestimate.
As a result
, we again
see
here that
working
duration has nothing in common with increasing
some
governments
budget or populations financial assets.
In conclusion
,
certainly
,
countries
with longer
average
working
terms are not
specifically
competitive
economically
,
in contrast
,
countries
with less than
average
working
time can be high level players.
In other words
, any
country
who aims to have a mature economical condition
has to
look for any solutions except of adding
working
hours.
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