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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? rJnk

First and foremost, there today's world is facing lots of diverse problems because of the accelerated amount of population. As a result of this, to make a place for habitat or a home for living, people do construction works and build new apartments. This is done by chopping down the trees which leads to deforestation and severe climatic changes. For instance, the expansion of glaciers due to the depletion of ozone layer in the atmosphere in the Arctic region. Furthermore, the reduced of rate of employment among the youngsters is a growing concern around the world. The authorities and the concerned government has to find possible solutions to mitigate such problems. As a result of that they will be well supported with stable financial income.

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 and foremost, there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's world is facing lots of diverse problems This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the accelerated amount of population. As a result
 of this, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a place for habitat or a home for living, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 do construction works and build new apartments. This is done
 by chopping down the trees which leads to deforestation and severe climatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. For instance
, the expansion of glaciers due to the depletion of ozone layer in the atmosphere in the Arctic region. Furthermore
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 of rate of employment among the youngsters is a growing concern around the world. The authorities and the concerned This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 find possible solutions to mitigate such problems. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result of that they will be This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-supported
well supported
 with stable financial income. 