Countries are often very keen to hold a major sporting event such as The Football World Cup or The Olympic Games. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of holding an important international sporting competition. v.1
Countries are often very keen to hold a major sporting event such as The Football World Cup or The Olympic Games. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of holding an important international sporting competition. v. 1
The government face difficult problems in order to increase peoples health care system due to the increasing amount of obese citizens. It is considered by some that introducing and encouraging students to participate in physical school activities are the key to solve the growing number of population on obesity. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement about how well educated students in physical education could prevent obesity in the future.
First of all, there are a lot of people who highly motivated into sports, but still are unable to play those sports. In other words, these people are not taught properly back when they were still in school. For example, a lot of my colleagues feel so much enthusiasm in badminton. However, around 90 percent of those friends of mine are unable to play badminton. Consequently, they start losing the motivation to play and choose to just enjoy watching the games on TV. Thus, due to the lack of ability to play sports, people will start losing motivation and begin to gain a lot of weight for not doing any sports at all.
Secondly, these days, school curriculum only focuses on learning in class lessons, such as math, science, biology, etc. , and reduce the amount of time for outside activities. As a result, students will feel exhausted because of the long duration in a class study process and eventually feel discouraged to play outside. They rather choose to rest at home than doing outdoor activities. That's why, government need to adjust some rules about school curriculum for students to balance the outdoor and indoor activity.
In conclusion, physical education lessons are critical in reducing the growth of overweight people because it will not only enable highly enthusiastic people to play but also improving youngsters physical body.
The
government
face difficult problems in order to increase
peoples
health care system due to the increasing amount of obese citizens. It
is considered
by
some
that introducing and encouraging
students
to participate in
physical
school
activities are the key to solve the growing number of population on obesity. In my opinion, I completely
agree
with this statement about how
well educated
students
in
physical
education could
prevent
obesity in the future.
First of all
, there are
a lot of
people
who
highly
motivated into
sports
,
but
still
are unable to
play
those
sports
.
In other words
, these
people
are not taught
properly
back when they were
still
in
school
.
For example
,
a lot of
my colleagues feel
so
much enthusiasm in badminton.
However
, around 90 percent of those friends of mine are unable to
play
badminton.
Consequently
, they
start
losing the motivation to
play
and choose to
just
enjoy watching the games on TV.
Thus
, due to the lack of ability to
play
sports
,
people
will
start
losing motivation and
begin
to gain
a lot of
weight for not doing any
sports
at all.
Secondly
, these days,
school
curriculum
only
focuses on learning in
class
lessons, such as math, science, biology, etc.
,
and
reduce
the amount of time for outside activities.
As a result
,
students
will feel exhausted
because
of the long duration in a
class
study process and
eventually
feel discouraged to
play
outside. They
rather
choose to rest at home than doing outdoor activities. That's why,
government
need to adjust
some
rules
about
school
curriculum for
students
to balance the outdoor and indoor activity.
In conclusion
,
physical
education lessons are critical in reducing the growth of overweight
people
because
it will not
only
enable
highly
enthusiastic
people
to
play
but
also
improving youngsters
physical
body.
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