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Countries are growing at a rapid speed. This is a reason numerous people say that it is quite vital to invest a huge amount of money while constructing big outdoor public places. Although, it is crucial especially in a city or town, I do not agree with the given statement and I will discuss my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs. First of all, in urban areas, there is already less space to live as compared to the population which is increasing day-by-day. To illustrate, people have small houses to accommodate their whole family; as a result, a number of people spend their lives in a single room. Hence, if there is free space, the authorities should adjust such people and give them a better standard of living especially in big cities and towns. Moreover, this kind of construction requires a vast sum of money which can be used in other crucial sectors such as education, infrastructure and so on. Furthermore, an appropriate amount of time is much needed to build that space; which leads to h

Countries are growing at a rapid speed. This is a reason numerous people say that it is quite vital to invest a huge amount of money while constructing big outdoor public places. Although, it is crucial especially in a city or town, I do not agree with the given statement and I will discuss my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs. First of all, in urban areas, there is already less space to live as compared to the population which is increasing day-by-day. To illustrate, people have small houses to accommodate their whole family; as a result, a number of people spend their lives in a single room. Hence, if there is free space, the authorities should adjust such people and give them a better standard of living especially in big cities and towns. Moreover, this kind of construction requires a vast sum of money which can be used in other crucial sectors such as education, infrastructure and so on. Furthermore, an appropriate amount of time is much needed to build that space; which leads to high expenditure of the government. Thus, people may not like that place and at the end ignore it. Hence, this will lead to wastage of funds and time as well. Therefore, authorities should spend their hard-earned money wisely. To conclude, the legislature should look into the well-being of its citizens rather than building new public places in open areas. Moreover, they can also invest in other crucial sectors to enhance the ease of life.

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people
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big
 outdoor public places. Although, it is crucial especially
 in a city or town, I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 statement and I will discuss my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs.

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First of all
, in urban areas, there is already less space to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 as compared to the population which is increasing day-by-day. To illustrate, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 to accommodate their whole family; as a result
, a number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 spend their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 in a single room. Hence
, if there is free space, the authorities should adjust such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 and give them a better standard of living especially
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cities and towns.

Moreover
, this kind of construction requires a vast sum of money which can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in other crucial sectors such as education, infrastructure and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. Furthermore
, an appropriate amount of time is This word is normally spelled with hyphen.much-needed
much needed
 to build that space; which leads to high expenditure of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. Thus
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 may not like that place and at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 it. Hence
, this will lead to wastage of funds and time as well
. Therefore
, authorities should spend their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-earned money wisely
.

To conclude
, the legislature should look into the well-being of its citizens rather
 than building new public places in open areas. Moreover
, they can also
 invest in other crucial sectors to enhance the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 of life. 