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Could you tell me about my dream job

Could you tell me about my dream job KnQOR

My dream job is a vocation that always helps me find out my hidden potential and gives me positive inspiration. When I graduate the university, I will do a certain job like everyone else; However, in the future, I want to become a general manager in the company. This position helps me always learn new knowledges to manage my group better every day. Because I have to do general management so I would have all knowledge belong to many sectors. Result that, I will find out which sector I will do the best, then I will focus on it and try to become a master. Exception from finding out my potential, I can inspire some positive things to my group, It is inspire to both the members in my group and me. Finally, To get this target I will try my best and learn continually.

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 me find out my hidden potential and gives me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 inspiration. When I graduate the university, I will do a certain job like everyone else; However
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 to both the members in my group and me. Finally
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 this target I will try my best and learn continually
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