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A hotel you have stayed in.

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I have stayed in a hotel in Djerba and knowing the dream island which is based in Tunisia. I think it is particular hotel because it's a high-tech hotel. It's very clean, comfortable and cozy. It is fully equipped and include all my requirements. The reception is nice. The receptionist give me all that I need without forgetting the room service, they bring me food and drink to my room. I really appreciate the people there because of their services and their kindness. Actually, what makes the hotel special is the club and activity, they make each night. For example, there are people playing the piano, and the playing the guitar and etc.
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. It's
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clean, comfortable and cozy. It is
fully
equipped and include all my requirements. The reception is nice. The receptionist give me all that I need without forgetting the room service, they bring me food and drink to my room. I
really
appreciate the
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people
there
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of their services and their kindness. Actually, what
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hotel
special is the club and activity, they
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, there are
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playing the piano, and the playing the guitar
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IELTS essay A hotel you have stayed in.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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