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A hotel you have stayed in.

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I have stayed in a hotel in Djerba and knowing the dream island which is based in Tunisia. I think it is particular hotel because it's a high-tech hotel. It's very clean, comfortable and cozy. It is fully equipped and include all my requirements. The reception is nice. The receptionist give me all that I need without forgetting the room service, they bring me food and drink to my room. I really appreciate the people there because of their services and their kindness. Actually, what makes the hotel special is the club and activity, they make each night. For example, there are people playing the piano, and the playing the guitar and etc.
I have stayed in a
hotel
in
Djerba
and knowing the dream island which
is based
in Tunisia. I
think
it
is particular
hotel
because
it's a high-tech
hotel
. It's
very
clean, comfortable and cozy. It is
fully
equipped and include all my requirements. The reception is nice. The receptionist give me all that I need without forgetting the room service, they bring me food and drink to my room. I
really
appreciate the
people
there
because
of their services and their kindness. Actually, what
makes
the
hotel
special is the club and activity, they
make
each night.
For example
, there are
people
playing the piano, and the playing the guitar
and etc
.
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IELTS essay A hotel you have stayed in.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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