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Could you give up fast fashion

Could you give up fast fashion e5aOG
Lost of people are planning to buy no new clothes this year, favouring second- hand or making do with what they already have To tell the truth I can't imagine giving up. Because I like to watch the flow of substances. I try to dress as fashionably as possible. But not all people think so. my best friend also dress to kill. dress to the nice dresses and dress like that For some reason I don't like being left behind. So I like modern clothes and I like to wear them.
Lost of
people
are planning to
buy
no new clothes this year,
favouring
second- hand or making do with what they already have

To
tell
the truth I can't imagine giving up.
Because
I like to
watch
the flow of substances. I try to
dress
as
fashionably
as possible.
But
not all
people
think
so
.

my
best friend
also
dress
to kill.
dress
to the nice
dresses
and
dress
like
that


For
some
reason I don't like being
left
behind.
So
I like modern clothes and I like to wear them.
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IELTS essay Could you give up fast fashion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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