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Could you give up fast fashion

Could you give up fast fashion e5aOG

Lost of people are planning to buy no new clothes this year, favouring second- hand or making do with what they already have To tell the truth I can't imagine giving up. Because I like to watch the flow of substances. I try to dress as fashionably as possible. But not all people think so. my best friend also dress to kill. dress to the nice dresses and dress like that For some reason I don't like being left behind. So I like modern clothes and I like to wear them.

Lost of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 no new clothes this year, Possible spelling mistake. 'favouring' is British English.favoring
favouring
 second- hand or making do with what they already have

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 the truth I can't imagine giving up. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the flow of substances. I try to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 as fashionably
 as possible. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 not all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 best friend also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 to kill. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDress
dress
 to the nice You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dresses
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 like Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that


For This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reason I don't like being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 behind. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I like modern clothes and I like to wear them. 