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Cooperative Learning ... Cooperative Learning

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The main topic of both the lecture and the listening is cooperative learning, an educational approach with great results in psychological and academic manners. The Article expresses the peculiarities of this method and how it is characterized. The lecturer supports this claim by providing verified data from a research that is able to show the reasons why this method it is better than the competitive and the individual learning method. First of all the lecturer claims that Cooperative learning is an optimal approach due to the connection that students create with each other and to the great academic results. The Author of the article explains this results by writing that positive interdependence and personal accountabilities help to achieve faster these goal because of the cooperation between people to achieve a common goal. The lecture also provides the fact that the need of improving the performance of the group makes sure that people confront each other and give constructive feedback that lead to an individual empowerment and to a grades improvement. Secondly, the lecturer affirms that the cooperative learning method is able to foster psychological resolution. The lecture support this claim because by using this type of method competition vanishes and students learn to trust, to communicate clearly and to help each without the influence of negative feelings.
The main topic of both the lecture and the listening is cooperative
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learning
, an educational approach with great results in psychological and academic manners. The Article expresses the peculiarities of this
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method
and how it
is characterized
.
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The
lecturer supports this claim by providing verified data from
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a research
that is
able to
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show
the reasons why this
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method
it is better than the competitive and the individual
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learning
method.

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First of all
the lecturer claims that Cooperative
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learning
is an optimal approach due to the connection that students create with each other and to the great academic results. The Author of the article
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explains
this results by writing that
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positive
interdependence and personal
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accountabilities
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help
to achieve faster
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these goal
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because
of the cooperation between
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people
to achieve a common goal. The lecture
also
provides the fact that the need of improving the performance of the group
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makes
sure that
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people
confront each other and give constructive feedback that lead to an individual empowerment and to a
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grades
improvement.

Secondly
, the lecturer affirms that the cooperative
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learning
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method
is able to foster psychological resolution. The lecture support this claim
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because
by using this type of
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method
competition vanishes and students learn to trust, to communicate
clearly
and to
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help
each without the influence of
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negative
feelings.
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IELTS essay Cooperative Learning. . . Cooperative Learning

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
217 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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