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Many parents are reluctant in vaccinating their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such are not needed. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely necessary despite some potential risks. Parents have always been wary of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried about injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of children unfortunately reacting adversely to their injections. These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself. Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast numbers of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of deaths so far prevented far outweighs the number of children who have been adversely affected by the immunisations themselves. Some diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination campaigs. Overall, the idea that vaccinations are unnecessary and dangerous is ill-informed and dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to a far worse outcome for society. This essay argued that people who are against vaccination have a flawed understanding of vaccinations and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion, vaccinating children is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small and occasional risk involved.
Vaccinating
children
has become
increasingly
unpopular among certain demographics of society. These
people
claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such are not needed. This essay will argue why
vaccinating
against spreadable diseases is
entirely
necessary despite
some
potential
risks
.

Parents have always been wary of
vaccinating
their
children
. They are
justifiably
worried about injecting their
children
with unfamiliar substances that could
potentially
make
them sick. Parents
naturally
feel protective of their
children
.
Indeed
, there have been
some
recorded instances of
children
unfortunately reacting
adversely
to their injections. These few instances have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and
potentially
more
dangerous
than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself.

Despite the minor
risks
associated with
vaccinating
children
, the
idea
that they are unnecessary and
dangerous
is completely preposterous. Vaccines have
prevented
vast numbers of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of deaths
so
far
prevented
far outweighs the number of
children
who have been
adversely
affected
by the
immunisations
themselves.
Some
diseases have actually been completely eradicated through vaccination
campaigs
.
Overall
, the
idea
that vaccinations are unnecessary and
dangerous
is ill-informed and
dangerous
in itself and could
potentially
lead to a far worse outcome for society.

This essay argued that
people
who are against vaccination have a flawed understanding of vaccinations and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion,
vaccinating
children
is an absolute imperative
that is
entirely
justified despite the
small
and occasional
risk
involved.
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IELTS essay Many parents are reluctant in vaccinating their children.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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