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Influence of human beings on world's ecosystem is leading loss of bio diversity.

Influence of human beings on world's ecosystem is leading loss of bio diversity. Qw1VP
Despite knowing about biodiversity's importance for a long time, human activity has been causing massive extinctions of different species. This essay will examine the main causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions which can lead to amelioration of the situation. The two main causes of species extinction are change of their habitats and overexploitation of natural resources. When humans artificially transform the environment, they destroy vegetation and animal's natural habitat. For instance, to build new roads, people are cutting down the trees and cementing the soil, altering the environment. Because of that, lot of species are dying out. Also, when the activities connected with capturing and harvesting a natural resource are too intense in a particular area, the resource becomes exausted. For example, too frequent fishing does not leave enough time for fish to reproduce and makes them disappear. In other words, human activities deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of biodiversity. Some possible solutions to this problem are protecting natural areas and promoting awareness among people. By protecting natural areas where human activities is limited and avoiding overexploitation of its resources, we can save the environment and prevent species from dying out. Moreover, next step in fighting biodiversity loss is informing the general population about the dangers of this issue. This way, people will be more conscious of the environment and would not overuse or destroy its resources. To conclude, people's activities that change the environment have negative impact on world's ecosystem. However, we can significantly lessen the extinction of animals and plants by protecting natural areas and enlightening people as to this problem.
Despite knowing about biodiversity's importance for a long time,
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human
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has been causing massive extinctions of
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different
species. This essay will examine the main causes of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions which can lead to amelioration of the situation.

The two main causes of species extinction are
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change
of their habitats and overexploitation of
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natural
resources. When
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humans
artificially
transform the
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environment
, they
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destroy
vegetation and animal's
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natural
habitat.
For instance
, to build new roads,
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people
are cutting down the trees and cementing the soil, altering the
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environment
.
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Because
of that, lot of species are dying out.
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, when the
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activities
connected with capturing and harvesting a
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natural
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resource
are too intense in a particular
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area
, the
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resource
becomes
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exausted
.
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, too frequent fishing does not
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leave
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enough
time for fish to reproduce and
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makes
them disappear.
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activities
deplete local flora and fauna and cause loss of biodiversity.

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Some
possible solutions to this problem are protecting
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natural
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areas
and promoting awareness among
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people
. By protecting
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natural
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areas
where
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human
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activities
is limited
and avoiding overexploitation of its resources, we can save the
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environment
and
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prevent
species from dying out.
Moreover
,
next
step in fighting biodiversity loss is informing the general population about the
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dangers
of this issue. This way,
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people
will be more conscious of the
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environment
and would not overuse or
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destroy
its resources.

To conclude
,
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people
's
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activities
that
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change
the
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environment
have
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negative
impact on world's ecosystem.
However
, we can
significantly
lessen the extinction of animals and plants by protecting
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natural
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areas
and enlightening
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people
as to this problem.
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IELTS essay Influence of human beings on world's ecosystem is leading loss of bio diversity.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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