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Fast foods will become growingly universal and in no time they will change the way and also replace, making traditional foods. At first, this essay will look at why canned food is preferred rather than traditional food, and then it will discuss the scarcity of traditional foods. To begin with, it takes time to prepare a delicious home-cooked meal and it even takes more time to enjoy the food which is why people tend to have the convenient way instead of lavishing their precious hours, as someone said ‘time is money ’. Therefore, people are way too busy to have traditional food. In addition, there’s also a fact that nowadays the traditional food is less available, even if people demand it. Whereas, there’s an abundance of frozen food available on the streets. Due to that people prefer convenience food over traditional foods In conclusion, it solely depends on the individual which kind of food they prefer. However, preserving the existence of traditional food is also necessary!
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. At
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is preferred
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traditional
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, and then it will discuss the scarcity of
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foods.

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with, it takes
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to prepare a delicious home-cooked meal and it even takes more
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to enjoy the
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which is why
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people
tend to have the convenient way
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‘time
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are way too busy to have
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In addition
, there’s
also
a fact that nowadays the
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traditional
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is less available, even if
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people
demand it.
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, there’s an abundance of frozen
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available on the streets. Due to that
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people
prefer convenience
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over
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foods


In conclusion
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solely
depends on the individual which kind of
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they prefer.
However
, preserving the existence of
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traditional
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is
also
necessary!
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IELTS essay convinience food good or bad

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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