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Conserving nature while providing water, food and energy for a growing human population is possible. It is not an either-or proposition. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Conserving nature while providing water, food and energy for a growing human population is possible. It is not an either-or proposition. yL61E
Environmental challenges such as climate change, air pollution, water scarcity pose one of the greatest threats to the existence of mankind as well as biodiversity. However, people are faced with a predicament about whether to sacrifice nature to the needs of a growing human population or vice versa. I believe that even though hardship is to be encountered, people can do better in both conservancy and need fulfillment. One the one hand, there are a number of barriers need to be addressed. Firstly, humans are inextricably linked to the environmental landscape within which our daily lives unfold, but very often people lack the knowledge or the means to manage these resources in an adequate way. Telling everyone to stop exploiting nature if this is their important income source is impossible as humans are not likely to sacrifice themselves to the benefit of others. Secondly, we are witnessing industrial-scale exploitation of the planet in the name of economic growth. This stems from a consumer society that has unsustainable lifestyle, such as taking diets that include eating meat and dairy products with every meal, a growing over-dependence on single-use plastic products. On the other hand, it is possible to strike a balance between conservation and consumption. Heightening public awareness of environmental propositions is of the utmost importance. People should be educated on how to cut down on their utilization of resources. For example, investment in renewable energy is highly recommended. Furthermore, in countries where natural richness is the main income, governments can provide people with alternatives, generate new incomes, teach them ways to manage their resources more sustainably, grow their crops in a more efficient and ecological way. In this way, over-dependence on natural resources is prevented. In conclusion, urgent measure to tackle this problem will pave way for preserving nature while providing for the needs of an expanding population.
Environmental challenges such as climate
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change
, air pollution, water scarcity pose one of the greatest threats to the existence of mankind
as well
as biodiversity.
However
,
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people
are faced
with a predicament about whether to sacrifice nature to the
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needs
of a growing human population or vice versa. I believe that
even though
hardship is to
be encountered
,
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people
can do better in both conservancy and
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need
fulfillment.

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One
the one hand, there are a number of barriers
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need
to
be addressed
.
Firstly
, humans are
inextricably
linked to the environmental landscape within which our daily
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lives
unfold,
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but
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very
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often
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people
lack the knowledge or the means to manage these resources
Consider replacing "in an adequate way" with the adverb for "adequate"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an adequate way
. Telling everyone to
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stop
exploiting nature if this is their
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important
income source is impossible as humans are not likely to sacrifice themselves to the benefit of others.
Secondly
, we are witnessing industrial-scale exploitation of the planet in the name of economic growth. This stems from a consumer society that has unsustainable lifestyle, such as taking diets that include eating meat and dairy products with every meal, a growing over-dependence on single-
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use
plastic products.

On the other hand
, it is possible to strike a balance between conservation and consumption. Heightening public awareness of environmental propositions is of the utmost importance.
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People
should
be educated
on how to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
down on their utilization of resources.
For example
, investment in renewable energy is
highly
recommended.
Furthermore
, in countries where natural richness is the main income,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
can provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
with alternatives, generate new incomes, teach them ways to manage their resources more
sustainably
, grow their crops in a more efficient and ecological way. In this way, over-dependence on natural resources is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevented
.

In conclusion
, urgent measure to tackle this problem will pave way for preserving nature while providing for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
of an expanding population.
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IELTS essay Conserving nature while providing water, food and energy for a growing human population is possible. It is not an either-or proposition.

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