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In modern area, one of the factor which many people believe that the success of companies or organizations is always under the effective communication between high and low employees. Therefore, they can inform their ideas and plan out a long-term disposition. So while other said that other factors is more significant. For instance, the targets, analysis and refinement, . . . Thus everythings have both positive and negative. That is a reason why in this essay, I will give you major reason for you to have your own outlook. It is to said that the great contact between managers and workers build up a welcoming and effective working environment. A breakdown in communication may put an end to the conduction of a business. On the other hand, it helps employees to develop their skills, knowledges and make clients more satisfied. For example, running a big hospital, the CEO must see a main picture, then talk constantly to doctors, nurses, staff to create a sufficient place where everyone can complete their tasks and to ensure the best quality of taking care patients. Apart from there are some reasons supporting the idea whether there need to be other factors or not. It is well known that job satisfaction is a major reason leading to the breakthrough of an association. For example, when employees enjoy a level of income that matches their work, enjoy vacations, retirement packages and a friendly and happy workplace, then the company benefits greatly from the loyalty of the employers. To sum it up, the workers can be given a welcoming and successfull environment to make a success companies and organizations.
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supporting the
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factors or not. It is well known that job satisfaction is a major
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leading to the breakthrough of an association.
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, when employees enjoy a level of income that matches their work, enjoy vacations, retirement packages and a friendly and happy workplace, then the
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IELTS essay comunication in the big organizzation

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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