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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this concurrent era, using digital gadgets like computers, mobile phones and many others for translating the language, although some feel that learning a foreign language is wasteful thing. I, however believe that it requires a computers' knowledge. Firstly, translating in to foreign language by using of electric devices are only limiting for writing but during the speaking it consumes a time to convert one language to another language. While, I concede that they save a time and make an error free sentences, the problem is that people require a knowledge of computer skills especially those it is difficult for older or illiterate people because they may not operate the computer without typing skills on computer. Moreover, people may become a dependable to translate the language on the computer so they may not enhance their communications skills and hand writing skill consequently, chances of extinct of hand writing may increase in the future. In addition, all almost every electric devices is too expensive so they are difficult to purchase especially those who under privilege people, many may claim that such electric devices are less time consume while translate. However, I agree that sometimes they may not catch the clear words or clear pronunciations hence its problematic to convince other people. Furthermore, such electric gadgets require battery or electricity for running so they impossible to translate while cutting off the power or low battery. To conclude, learning foreign language is not beneficial for writing only but also develop the speaking skill. Therefore, although I acknowledge that computer is helps to translate accurately, I disagree that it may kill the hand writing skills in the future.
In this concurrent era, using digital gadgets like computers, mobile phones and
many
others for translating the
language
, although
some
feel that learning a foreign
language
is wasteful thing. I,
however
believe that it requires a computers' knowledge.

Firstly
, translating in to foreign
language
by using of
electric
devices are
only
limiting for
writing
but
during the speaking it consumes a time to convert one
language
to another
language
. While, I concede that they save a time and
make
an error free sentences, the problem is that
people
require a knowledge of computer
skills
especially
those it is difficult for older or illiterate
people
because
they may not operate the computer without typing
skills
on computer.
Moreover
,
people
may become a dependable to
translate
the
language
on the computer
so
they may not enhance their communications
skills
and hand
writing
skill
consequently
, chances of extinct of hand
writing
may increase in the future.

In addition
, all almost every
electric
devices is too expensive
so
they are difficult to
purchase
especially
those who under privilege
people
,
many
may claim that such
electric
devices are less time consume while
translate
.
However
, I
agree
that
sometimes
they may not catch the
clear
words or
clear
pronunciations
hence
its problematic to convince other
people
.
Furthermore
, such
electric
gadgets require battery or electricity for running
so
they impossible to
translate
while cutting off the power or low battery.

To conclude
, learning foreign
language
is not beneficial for
writing
only
but
also
develop the speaking
skill
.
Therefore
, although I acknowledge that computer is
helps
to
translate
accurately
, I disagree that it may kill the hand
writing
skills
in the future.
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IELTS essay Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language.

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  American English
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