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computers should never have been invented. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Technology is developing day by day which play a vital role in human life because of it available amenities. Under the development of technology, computers were invented and bring a lot of benefit to everyone, but some people inferred that this invention should never be invented. Personally, I strongly oppose this statement. We cannot deny the great amenities computers bring us in both working and studying. Like you know, computers are a giant memory which archives the history of the world, researchers in many fields from science to art. You can easily find out the problem you concern about with a double-click, for instance, I am caring about Covid-19 so I write the keywords down in the toolbar and thousands of news, research appear face to face with me. In addition, computers also offer a lot of services like Mail, Words, Excel. . . for people to exchange information, inform people about an event. Beside the convenient in work and study, it also helps people communicate with their family and friends. Computers provide a lot of app and services to connect with others, from basic such as Facebook, Messengers to advance app for special purposes. Users can communicate by messages, phone call or video call; keep in touch with their family despite the distance you are in. For example, during the Covid-19 lockdown we utilize Zoom for online lessons. Moreover, computers also allow you share your experience, story or status to everyone become famous and well known. In conclusion, everything has its own two faces and it also unexpected for computers which are believed that the things shouldn’t be invented, but if you acknowledge how to use it, you will benefit more than you expect

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because
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a lot of
 benefit to everyone, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 inferred that this invention should never be invented
. Personally
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 oppose this statement.

We cannot deny the great amenities computers bring us in both working and studying. Like you know, computers are a giant memory which archives the history of the world, researchers in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 fields from science to art. You can easily
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double-click
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so
 I write the keywords down in the toolbar and thousands of news, research appear face to face with me. In addition
, computers also
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a lot of
 services like Mail, Words, Excel. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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people
 to exchange information, inform You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 about an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
.

Beside the convenient in work and study, it also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 communicate with their family and friends. Computers provide Possible agreement error. The noun app seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of apps".a lot of apps
a lot of app
 and services to connect with others, from basic such as Facebook, Messengers to advance app for special purposes. Users can communicate by messages, phone call or video call; This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch with their family despite the distance you are in. For example
, during the Covid-19 lockdown we utilize Zoom for online lessons. Moreover
, computers also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 you Please check whether 'to' is missing here (to allow to do something).to share
share
 your experience, story or status to everyone become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 and well known.

In conclusion
, everything has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 two faces and It seems that a verb is missing.it isit was
it
also
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 that the things shouldn’t be invented
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if you acknowledge how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it, you will benefit more than you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect