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Computers as translators

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Learning foreign languages can be considered as time consuming since computers translate perfectly well and rather fast. This essay disagrees with the aforementioned statement. Firstly, this essay will suggest the merits of using machines as a translator and it will then state some essential flaws which this tool might bring before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. To embark on, it is believed that modern digital devices, computer software and online applications are the best in translation languages. Maybe this is because everyone can use computers and it is not a tough job to press the buttons on the keyboard. Not only this way of interpretation is fast enough, but also advanced.

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because
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use
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only
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enough
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 advanced. 

IELTS essay Computers as translators

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

111 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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