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computers, are they beneficial or not

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Nowadays, almost everyone has a computer of their own. It is practical, fast and also necessary. In today's world, it is the most essential device for achieving information, thus, it is inevitable to make use of them in classrooms. In this era of technology, without the help of electronics, it is difficult to interact with each other. This includes teachers and students due to the fact that after a school day there isn't any connection between them. It can be seen in the light of the pandemic that is happening all around the world, a good educational system is a must for keeping up with learning, checking the progress of the learners and maintain the network for everyone in that institution. In favour of being guided in the right direction, it makes all the researches accessible with one click. In addition, it simplifies the development that can be seen for instructors. On the other hand, it has many downsides caused by the domination of technology is in the hands of younger generations. Especially pupils that do not understand the importance of plagiarism may cheat in their assignments and take credit for it. Furthermore, the internet is an open place, therefore it is unavoidable to reach misinformations. Either way, teachers should guide them in any step that they have taken and inform them about the various ways that make the computers beneficial. The way I see it, computers have a plethora of benefits. It is up to school management and educators to find methods to get the most of it. There is no doubt that with this globalisation, there will be electronic devices everywhere and it will be no escape from the advantages that the internet provides. That is why it is critical to take a step forward and depend on computers in teaching.
Nowadays, almost everyone has a computer of their
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own
. It is practical,
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fast
and
also
necessary. In
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today
's world, it is the most essential device for achieving information,
thus
, it is inevitable to
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make
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use
of them in classrooms.

In this era of technology, without the
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help
of electronics, it is difficult to interact with each other. This includes teachers and students due to the fact that after a school day there isn't any
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connection between
them. It can be
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seen
in the light of the pandemic
that is
happening all around the world, a
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good
educational system is a
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must
for keeping up with learning, checking the progress of the learners and maintain the network for everyone in that institution. In
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favour
of
being guided
in the right direction, it
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makes
all the researches accessible with one click.
In addition
, it simplifies the development that can be
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seen
for instructors.

On the other hand
, it has
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many
downsides caused by the domination of technology is in the hands of younger generations.
Especially
pupils that do not understand the importance of plagiarism may cheat in their assignments and take credit for it.
Furthermore
, the internet is an open place,
therefore
it is unavoidable to reach
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misinformations
. Either way, teachers should guide them in any step that they have taken and inform them about the various ways that
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make
the computers beneficial.

The way I
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see
it, computers have a plethora of benefits. It is up to school management and educators to find methods to
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get
the most of it. There is no doubt that with this
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globalisation
, there will be electronic devices everywhere and it will be no escape from the advantages that the internet provides.
That is
why it is critical to take a step forward and depend on computers in teaching.
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IELTS essay computers, are they beneficial or not

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  American English
4 paragraphs
303 words
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