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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement? qN8a
There is no doubt that these days all sorts of people use computers. The question is computers the most significant thinh that we, the world, invented? I going to discuss that and give some proves on it. Also, I personally think that there are the most singnificant invention. In terms of positive aspects, that this invention make our life more easy and flexiable. The main reason given to support this claim is that we can now buy from internet, need to accompany some books with you? you can do it with Amazon Kindle. To illustrate, now you do not need to go out and buy it from the internet. . . etc. In other words it really make our life better than ever before. Moreover, it opens new sector and new shop, what that mean? That mean new jobs, new products and a lot more movement in the economy. In other words Computer sector estimated in 2019 at 300 Billion dollar. This is really huge number. Also, now you can learn, on your laptop, anything you want to learn Languages, Maths, Geography, Physics, Biology, Chemistry, Programming and more and more topics. The knowledge that now in the was impossible before we invented computers and the internet came along. Furthermore, now nearly every thing has a role of computer going, such as the auto-pilot in planes, self-driving cars and our little phones. In conclusion, although there are some people do accept with what I say and there are not. Therefore, I believe that computers still the most critical thing invented in the last century.
There is no doubt that these days all sorts of
people
use
computers. The question is computers the most significant
thinh
that we, the world, invented?
I going
to discuss that and give
some
proves on it.
Also
, I
personally
think
that there are the most
singnificant
invention.

In terms of
positive
aspects, that this invention
make
our life more easy and
flexiable
. The main reason
given
to support this claim is that we can
now
buy
from internet, need to accompany
some
books with you?
you
can do it with Amazon Kindle. To illustrate,
now
you do not need to go out and
buy
it from the internet.
.
.
etc
.
In other words
it
really
make
our life better than ever
before
.

Moreover
, it opens
new
sector and
new
shop, what that mean? That mean
new
jobs,
new
products and a lot more movement in the economy.
In other words
Computer sector estimated in 2019 at 300 Billion
dollar
. This is
really
huge number.
Also
,
now
you can learn, on your laptop, anything you want to learn Languages,
Maths
, Geography, Physics, Biology, Chemistry, Programming and more and more topics. The knowledge that
now
in the was impossible
before
we invented computers and the internet came along.
Furthermore
,
now
nearly
every thing has a role of computer going, such as the auto-pilot in
planes
, self-driving cars and our
little
phones.

In conclusion
, although there are
some
people
do accept with what I say and there are not.
Therefore
, I believe that computers
still
the most critical thing invented in the last century.
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IELTS essay : Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. with this statement?

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