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The most important effect of education in mordere generation is huge. Electronic gadget are playing a key role in ones education. Classroom learning has become a less priority when it compared to virtual learning. This essay will elaborate how idea one and idea two suffice to justify my answer. At the outset, there are numerous examples but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that virtual learning has become less priority.
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education. Classroom learning has become a less priority when it compared to virtual learning. This essay will elaborate how
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two suffice to justify my answer. At the outset, there are numerous examples
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the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that virtual learning has become less priority.

IELTS essay computers are being used more and more in education-there-will-be-soon-no-role-for-teachers-in-the-classroom-1

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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