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In the past, there were many families with a large number of children all over the world.

In the past, there were many families with a large number of children all over the world. There are various advantages and disadvantages of being a part of large families. One can discuss being a part of large families from a different point of view. There are a few difficulties of living in crowded families. It depends on the financial level; probably, you need to share your room with your brothers/sisters, so you have less privacy. The cost of living for large families is more; therefore, parents should work harder to overcome the expenses. Parents have less time to deal with the kids; hence they can not focus on the children's training as much as they want.
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number of children all over the world. There are various advantages and disadvantages of being a part of
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. One can discuss being a part of
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from a
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. It depends on the financial level;
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, you need to share your room with your brothers/sisters,
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you have less privacy. The cost of living for
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is more;
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, parents should work harder to overcome the expenses. Parents have less time to deal with the kids;
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they can not focus on the children's training as much as they want.
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IELTS essay In the past, there were many families with a large number of children all over the world.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
117 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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