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Computer is boon or curse, give advantage and disadvantage

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Are you know about the magic box? It's a computer. It is a machine, who are working on electricity. This is invented by the great scientist charls babbeze. It is the greatest innovation of 20 century. When it was invented peaple was believed that it is some magic. And the size of first computer who is super computer was very large. In 21 century we can't Imagine our life without computer. Nowadays it is a basic need of every person. All people have thair different requirements from computer. For example, student require for business, designer require for their art and also children are playing games to much in computer. In the industries 80% machinery is automatic now a days. So computer is require to operate this all machinery. Automatic machinery is totally depending on programming which is provide by computer. But it has bad side also. When you are doing continues work on computer our body feels some pain like neck pain, back pain also 80% peaple who is computer engineer and software engineer have a week eyes. It is directly affect on our eyes. Kids are edicted to computer. Computer is main source of creating radiation and it's directly affect to ourbody. So, my opinion is computer is a very miraculous device and it's really make our life easy. We takes many banifits from it. But also they have some problem. So, we have to use it carefully and it's a boon for us.
Are you know about the magic box?
It's
a computer. It is a machine, who are working on electricity. This
is invented
by the great scientist
charls
babbeze
. It is the greatest innovation of
20 century
.
When
it
was invented
peaple
was believed
that it is
some
magic. And the size of
first
computer who is super computer was
very
large.

In
21 century
we can't Imagine our life without computer. Nowadays it is a basic need of every person. All
people
have
thair
different
requirements from computer.
For example
, student require for business, designer require for their art and
also
children are playing games
to
much in computer.

In the industries 80% machinery is automatic
now a days
.
So
computer is
require
to operate this all machinery. Automatic machinery is
totally
depending on programming which is
provide
by computer.

But
it has
bad
side
also
. When you are doing continues work on computer our body feels
some
pain
like neck pain, back pain
also
80%
peaple
who is computer engineer and software engineer have a week eyes. It is
directly
affect
on our eyes. Kids are
edicted
to computer. Computer is main source of creating radiation and
it's
directly
affect to
ourbody
.

So
, my opinion is computer is a
very
miraculous device and
it's
really
make
our life easy. We
takes
many
banifits
from it.
But
also
they have
some
problem.
So
, we
have to
use
it
carefully
and
it's
a boon for us.
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IELTS essay Computer is boon or curse, give advantage and disadvantage

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