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A time you changed your opinion.

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2. A time you changed your opinion. When it was. What the original opinion was. Do children like to change opinion. When do people change opinions. Who do young people turn to for advice. Do people like giving opinions about politics. We changed opinions when. We have made a mistake. We have misjudged others. We have acquired knowledge of something. We have been criticised by someone or others. Poor opinion. Strong. Mixed. Honest. Opinion. Vary. Differ. Change. Phrases. A difference of opinion. A matter of opinion.
2. A time you
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your opinion.

When it was.

What the original
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opinion
was.

Do children like to
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change
opinion.

When do
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people
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opinions.

Who do young
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people
turn to for advice.

Do
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people
like giving
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opinions
about politics.

We
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changed
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opinions
when.

We have made a mistake.

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We
have misjudged others.

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We
have acquired knowledge of something.

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We
have been
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criticised
by someone or others.

Poor
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opinion
. Strong. Mixed. Honest.

Opinion. Vary. Differ.
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Change
.

Phrases.

A difference of opinion.

A matter of
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.

IELTS essay A time you changed your opinion.

Essay
  American English
17 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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