Despite the fact that it is not necessary to change, countless people tend to purchase cutting edge commodities rather than using the old ones they have. In the essay the two primary reasons for this behaviour and the impact of its negatives for society as well as individuals will be explained.
The most common thing which could affect people to change new things is that they usually are influenced by their community. One particularly salient example of this is when younger see their friends having trending products, such as the newest iPhone or video games, it will have a mental impact on their thought, that they crave to have exactly the same goods as well. This is due to before that, their friends are attracted by many advertisings which are based on social media platforms or TV programs. Therefore, they follow the trend to change the state of the art commodities.
Even though some supporters of this may argue that it can help nations to boost their economy when it comes to people changing the products they use regularly, I personally believe that the drawbacks it brings are far outweighed than the benefits. For individuals, if people have an addiction to buying unnecessary goods, they will end up having huge debts. In this case, it is not a positive development for our society as the more individuals face with credit risk, the huge burdens the nations obtain.
By way of conclusion, the reasons for people who are more likely to own new products is thank to the trend of social media and the influence of their community. I once again reaffirm my position that this buying behaviour may cause some individuals getting into debts and then slow down the economic progression of the nations.
Despite the fact that it is not necessary to
change
, countless
people
tend to
purchase
cutting edge commodities
rather
than using the
old
ones they have. In the essay the two primary reasons for this
behaviour
and the impact of its negatives for society
as well
as
individuals
will be
explained
.
The most common thing which could affect
people
to
change
new things is that they
usually
are influenced
by their community. One
particularly
salient example of this is when younger
see
their friends having trending products, such as the newest iPhone or video games, it will have a mental impact on their
thought
, that they crave to have exactly the same
goods
as well
. This is due to
before
that, their friends
are attracted
by
many
advertisings
which
are based
on social media platforms or TV programs.
Therefore
, they follow the trend to
change
the
state of the art
commodities.
Even though
some
supporters of this may argue that it can
help
nations to boost their economy when it
comes
to
people
changing the products they
use
regularly
, I
personally
believe that the drawbacks it brings are far outweighed than the benefits. For
individuals
, if
people
have an addiction to buying unnecessary
goods
, they will
end
up having huge debts.
In this case
, it is not a
positive
development for our society as the more
individuals
face with credit
risk
, the huge burdens the nations obtain.
By way of conclusion, the reasons for
people
who are more likely to
own
new products is
thank
to the trend of social media and the influence of their community. I once again reaffirm my position that this buying
behaviour
may cause
some
individuals
getting into debts and then slow down the economic progression of the nations.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes