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Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job on the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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How much a University degree important to get a good job? Regarding whether to get into a good job with or without completing a University education, there is a case to be made on both sides of the debate. There is no denying that having a University degree makes the job hunting path much smoother. As there would be complete knowledge about the subject matter it is likely to grab a good position in any job. Having completed the education, the horizon of job search widens as the job can the looked up in any stream. Also, most companies do want a candidate to have a complete course of their education before joining the firm. For example, many corporations keep a minimum 60 percentage criteria in college degree to be eligible for a candidate to sit for the interview. Conversely, getting a taste of experience in the early stage of life has this own merits. Getting into a job without a University education will save substantial years which can be focused to gain experience and other knowledge. The knowledge acquired through the experience of life has a far more deep impact than reading textbooks. For instance, many successful people in today's world are college dropouts and they gain experience by making mistakes rather than getting into an old-fashioned rote-learning tradition. Overall, it seems, to me that completing university education is not important to get into a good job or to be successful for that matter.
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with or without completing a
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education
, there is a case to
be made
on both sides of the debate.

There is no denying that having a
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University
degree
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makes
the
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job
hunting path much smoother.
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As
there would be complete knowledge about the
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subject matter
it is likely to grab a
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good
position in any
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job
. Having completed the
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education
, the horizon of
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job
search widens as the
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job
can the looked up in any stream.
Also
, most
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companies
do want a candidate to have a complete course of their
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education
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before
joining the firm.

For example
,
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many
corporations
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keep
a minimum 60 percentage criteria in college degree to be eligible for a candidate to sit for the interview.

Conversely
, getting a taste of
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experience
in the early stage of life has this
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own
merits. Getting into a
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job
without a
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University
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education
will save substantial years which can
be focused
to gain
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experience
and other knowledge. The knowledge acquired through the
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experience
of life has a far more deep impact than reading textbooks.
For instance
,
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many
successful
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people
in
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today
's world are college
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dropouts and
they gain
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experience
by making mistakes
rather
than getting into an
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old
-fashioned rote-learning tradition.

Overall
, it seems, to me that completing
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university
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education
is not
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important
to
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get
into a
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good
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job
or to be successful for that matter.
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IELTS essay Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job on the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important

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