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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. xq1o
It is often said that graduating from university is more favourable to get better job opportunity, especially in today's technology-focussed world. However the issue is not entirely straightforward, and argument also be made that people having better developing skills and experience is given more value. This essay will discuss a debate and provide the concluding view. On the one hand, those who support the graduation from university is helpful to justify the major benefit it can bring to people, that is by getting the theory knowledge of particular subject or stream. This means working in a feild with having its background experience. The point furthur supported by the recent survey conducted by the well-reputed newspaper. Another argument is that universities and colleges also provide well facilities to people, which is useful to access the practical knowlegde. On the other hand, people opposing case. It is also agrued that experience and skilled labour is better option. In industries, employeers hire skilled labour instead of educated ones, as they work for less wages. Also few companies put more effort to fetch experienced employee, So they don't have to train them. Moreover, This created an apportunity for those who are drop out from universities, only if they have better knowledge or skill. In Conclusion, I believe that both the arguments stood right in their own way. However, as per my opinion, In today's world education and experience both are necessary, but I give more importance to get degree from university or college.
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often
said that graduating from
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university
is more
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favourable
to
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get
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better
job opportunity,
especially
in
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today
's technology-focussed world.
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However
the issue is not
entirely
straightforward, and argument
also
be made
that
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people
having
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better
developing
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skills
and
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experience
is
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given
more value.

This essay will discuss a debate and provide the concluding view.

On the one hand, those who support the graduation from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is helpful to justify the major benefit it can bring to
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people
,
that is
by getting the theory knowledge of particular subject or stream. This means working in a
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feild
with having its background
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experience
. The point
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furthur
supported by the recent survey conducted by the well-reputed newspaper. Another argument is that
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universities
and colleges
also
provide well facilities to
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people
, which is useful to access the practical
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knowlegde
.

On the other hand
,
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people
opposing case. It is
also
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agrued
that
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experience
and skilled
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labour
is
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better
option. In industries,
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employeers
hire skilled
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labour
instead
of educated ones, as they work for
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less
wages.
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Also
few
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companies
put more effort to fetch experienced employee,
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So
they don't
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have to
train them.
Moreover
, This created an
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apportunity
for those who are drop out from
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universities
,
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only
if they have
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better
knowledge or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
.

In Conclusion
, I believe that both the arguments stood right in their
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own
way.
However
, as per my opinion, In
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today
's world education and
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experience
both are necessary,
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but
I give more importance to
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get
degree from
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university
or college.
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IELTS essay Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.

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