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Complete the following sentences with a NUMBER OR DATE from the passage.

Complete the following sentences with a NUMBER OR DATE from the passage. DRrE
Kormilda College is a unique school situated near Darwin in Australia’s Northern Territory. For 20 years, to 1989, Kormilda College operated as a government-run, live-in school for high school Aboriginal students. In 1989 it was bought from the Government by two Christian church groups and since then it has expanded enormously, to include a day school as well as boarders (residential students) in Years 8-12. Although 320 pupils of the College’s total number are Aboriginal students, drawn mainly from isolated communities across the Northern Territory, Kormilda also has a waiting list of non – Aboriginal students. With a current enrolment of 600, student numbers are expected to grow to 860 by 1999. Central to the mission of the school is the encouragement of individual excellence, which has resulted in programs designed especially for the student population. Specialist support programs allow’ traditional Aboriginal students, who are often second language users, to understand and succeed in the mainstream curriculum. A Gifted and Talented Program, including a special Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Tertiary Aspirations program, has been introduced, as has an Adaptive Education Unit. Moreover, in Years 11 and 12, students may choose to follow the standard Northern Territory Courses, or those of the International Baccalaureate (I. B. ). To provide appropriate pastoral care, as well as a suitable academic structure, three distinct sub-schools have been established. Pre-Secondary: For Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students in Years 8-10 who are of secondary school age but have difficulties reading and writing. Supported Secondary: For Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander students who are of secondary school age and operating at secondary school year levels 8-12 who need specific second language literacy and numeracy support. Secondary: For multi-cultural Years 8-12 students.
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Kormilda
College is a unique
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school
situated near Darwin in Australia’s Northern Territory. For 20 years, to 1989,
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Kormilda
College operated as a
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government
-run,
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live
-in
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school
for high
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school
Aboriginal
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students
. In
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1989 it
was
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bought
from the
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Government
by two Christian church groups and since then it has expanded
enormously
, to include a day
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school
as well
as boarders (residential
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students)
in Years 8-12. Although 320 pupils of the College’s total number are Aboriginal
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students
, drawn
mainly
from isolated communities across the Northern Territory,
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Kormilda
also
has a waiting list of non
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–
Aboriginal
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students
. With a
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current
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enrolment
of 600,
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student
numbers are
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expected
to grow to 860 by 1999.

Central to the mission of the
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school
is the encouragement of individual excellence, which has resulted in
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programs
designed
especially
for the
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student
population. Specialist support
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programs
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allow
’ traditional Aboriginal
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students
,
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who
are
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often
second language users, to understand and succeed in the mainstream curriculum. A Gifted and Talented
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Program
, including a special Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Tertiary Aspirations
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program
, has
been introduced
, as has an Adaptive Education Unit.
Moreover
, in Years 11 and 12,
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students
may choose to follow the standard Northern Territory Courses, or those of the International Baccalaureate (I. B.
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)
.

To provide appropriate pastoral care,
as well
as a suitable academic structure, three distinct sub-schools have
been established
.

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Pre-Secondary
: For Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander
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students
in Years 8-10
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who
are of
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secondary
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school
age
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but
have difficulties reading and writing.

Supported
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Secondary
: For Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander
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students
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who
are of
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secondary
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school
age and operating at
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secondary
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school
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year
levels 8-12
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who
need specific second language literacy and numeracy support.

Secondary: For multi-cultural Years 8-12
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students
.
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IELTS essay Complete the following sentences with a NUMBER OR DATE from the passage.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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