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Advantages and Disadvantages of Globalisation

Advantages and Disadvantages of Globalisation YpVm

Everything has two sides and the globalization is not the exception. Our first thoughts about this topic include the process of global "McDonaldisation" and generally speaking, spreading the one, American, lifestyle across the whole Globe. Firstly, I would try to concentrate on the positive aspects of globalisation. As far as economy is concerned, institutions like the Global Bank or IMF are always focussed on developing the 'Third World' and helping poor people to combat their life obstacles (through loans and donations). Moreover, the world becomes an area of sharing thoughts(e. g. philosophical or economical doctrines ), which become popular due to lack of barriers. To sum up, globalisation has both positive and negative influence on our everyday life. I can't agree with the popular statement that we should try to avoid being affected by it. However, we must not forget about our surroundings and local communities. They have a great value which should last forever.

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 and generally
 speaking, spreading the one, American, lifestyle across the whole Globe.

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positive
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globalisation
. As far as economy is concerned
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people
 to combat their life obstacles (through loans and donations). Moreover
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, which become popular due to lack of barriers.

To sum up, Do not mix variants of the same word ('globalisation' and 'globalization') within a single text.globalization
globalisation
 has both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 influence on our everyday life. I can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the popular statement that we should try to avoid being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by it. However
, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 not forget about our surroundings and local communities. They have a great value which should last forever. 