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Comparison shopping pick consumable product that you use.Compare prices at as many stores in your area as possible

Comparison shopping pick consumable product that you use. Compare prices at as many stores in your area as possible a70ed
We know, women are interested in going shopping, especially a store-brand in which perfume products are bought. When it comes to a consumable product that I use, it is French perfume. French perfume are competitive, they give excellent effect and lovely aroma. As a consequence, I would prefer French perfume. I always purchase it from Mega Polis. There, cost of French perfumes are approximately 360 dollars. Perfumes in Mega Polis are more well-qualified than compared with other store-brands. In other stores, we can see the same products as Mega Polis, however, in Mega Polis, there perfumes are bigger in size than others. Online shops sell products less than usual markets, but the qualities of products are unsatisfactory. When I go shopping, I buy something. Before buying it, I compare it with other markets'products. Then I buy a product
We know, women
are interested
in going shopping,
especially
a store-brand in which
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perfume
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products
are
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bought
. When it
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comes
to a consumable
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product
that I
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use
, it is French
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perfume
. French
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perfume
are competitive, they give excellent effect and lovely aroma. As a consequence, I would prefer French
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perfume
. I always
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purchase
it from
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Mega
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Polis
. There, cost of French
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perfumes
are approximately 360 dollars.
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Perfumes
in
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Mega
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Polis
are more well-qualified than compared with
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other
store-brands. In
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other
stores, we can
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see
the same
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products
as
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Mega
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Polis
,
however
, in
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Mega
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Polis
, there
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perfumes
are
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bigger in size
than others. Online shops sell
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products
less than usual markets,
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but
the qualities of
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products
are unsatisfactory. When I go shopping, I
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buy
something.
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Before
buying it, I compare it with
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other
markets'products. Then I
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buy
a
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product
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IELTS essay Comparison shopping pick consumable product that you use. Compare prices at as many stores in your area as possible

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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