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comparing adjectives with English grammar

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However we learn new information from both of E-books and conventional books, they have distinctive features that make each of them different and unique. Initially, by popularity and usage E-books the first position all over the world, on account of the fact that almost 70 % people around the world utilize this version of books. In spite of the fact that conventional book are also used by many people widely, E-books own more wantings than conventional books. On account of the fact that if some kinds of the conventional books are not printed, we can find its e-version easily no going to bookshops far away. Therefore we can buy or read any kind of e- books which we want since the internet becomes developed. On the other hand we are forced to go to library or bookshops to buy or read ordinary books. Although, e-books have many useful sides, it can influence to our health and eye-set badly, yet we don’t get any harm while reading ordinary books. When it comes to their similarity, we are educated and get improvement both of them. In addition we discover something new while searching information. It doesn’t matter which type of books we use, the most significance is to learn whenever and wherever we are.
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However
we learn new information from both of E-books and
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conventional
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books
, they have distinctive features that
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make
each of them
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different
and unique.
Initially
, by popularity and usage E-books the
first
position all over the world, on account of the fact that almost 70 %
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people
around the world utilize this version of
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books
.
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In spite of
the fact that
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conventional
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book
are
also
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used
by
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many
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people
widely
, E-books
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own
more
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wantings
than
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conventional
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books
. On account of the fact that if
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some
kinds of the
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conventional
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books
are not printed, we can find its e-version
easily
no going to bookshops far away.
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Therefore
we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
or read any kind of e-
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books
which we want since the internet becomes developed.
On the other hand
we
are forced
to go to library or bookshops to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
or read ordinary
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books
. Although, e-books have
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many
useful sides, it can influence to our health and eye-set
badly
,
yet
we don’t
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get
any harm while reading ordinary
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books
. When it
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comes
to their similarity, we
are educated
and
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get
improvement both of them. In
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addition we
discover something new while searching information. It doesn’t matter which type of
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books
we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
, the most significance is to learn whenever and wherever we are.
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IELTS essay comparing adjectives with English grammar

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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