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compare what the online advertisement promises with the guest ' experience of the apartment

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A: Hi B, how's your business trip B: Everything is going well, I am having 2 days rest here. However, the service of the hotel is a bit problematic. A: What's the problem? I found the ad to be great. B: The apartment doesn't have a nice view and the color of the room is a bit dark. Its area is also a bit small and the network price is not very good. A: I think you should call the manager about this. They will solve the problem for you B: I will. Honestly I'm a bit disappointed. I also want the room to have a newer TV. A: Then have a great day off. See you again.
A: Hi B, how's your business trip

B: Everything is going well, I am having 2 days rest here.
However
, the service of the hotel is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
problematic.

A: What's the problem? I found the ad to be great.

B: The apartment doesn't have a nice view and the color of the room is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
dark. Its area is
also
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
and the network price is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

A: I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
you should call the manager about this. They will solve the problem for you

B: I will.
Honestly
I'm a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bit
disappointed. I
also
want the room to have a newer TV.

A: Then have a great day off.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
See
you again.
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IELTS essay compare what the online advertisement promises with the guest ' experience of the apartment

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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