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Buying things in internet

Buying things in internet B7GBw

Bought goods from Internet today becoming more popular. Positive things outweight disadvantages, first you can find anything available in the online shops, phones, clothes, all the brands is available. Also that, s will help people to rest them self, you don't need to go to markets, just order your profits and will arrive to you in your home. I think also prises in Internet market is lowest more than local markets, many times i want to purchase a lot of things in the online shops i found the prise is good, also delivery most of the time free. Quality is very good and you can find a high quality, a number of brands using applications to sell them products with special discounts. Negative things in buying things from Internet shops is stagnation in the local markets, that can make the national economic law, and that also help in unemployed. Fake goods one of the most things can happen with the people when they buy something from Internet and you paid your invoice but your brands don't come to you, here in Sudan online markets not popular cause these one of the many reasons happen, you order goods and after that when you call back them you don't find any answers.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
Bought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 from Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 becoming more popular.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
Positive
 things Possible spelling mistake found.outweighoutweighsout weight
outweight
 disadvantages, first
 you can find anything available in the online shops, phones, clothes, all the brands is available.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 that, s will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to rest them self, you don't need to go to markets, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 order your profits and will arrive to you in your home.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
also
Possible spelling mistake found.pricesarisesprizesrisescrisespraises
prises
 in Internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
 is lowest more than local markets, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 things in the online shops Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'prise' is correct. If 'prise' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the prise
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
, also
 delivery most of the time free.

Quality is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 and you can find a high quality, a number of brands using applications to sell them products with special discounts.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
Negative
 things in buying things from Internet shops is stagnation in the local markets, that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the national economic law, and that also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in unemployed.

Fake You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 one of the most things can happen with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 something from Internet and you paid your invoice This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 your brands don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to you, here in Sudan online markets not popular cause these one of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 reasons happen, you order You use this word too often, consider replacing it withequipmentpropertyfurnishingsfurniture
goods
 and after that when you call back them you don't find any answers. 