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Compare three methods of recruitment

Compare three methods of recruitment LbLV1

The flowcharts show the comparison between three approches to recruit new employees in a company. Overview, ot is noticed that all three methods are easy to hire qualified workers. Moreover, first and second methods for recruiting employees are within the company and press, while third method is outsidw the agency. It is clear from method one that it involves 3 simple steps to select workers that are shortlist, interview and job offer. However, in case of second way of hiring employees, which is similar to the first method but after preparing a shortlist, along with an interview, a test is also taken before offering a job to the employee. Probing to the further detail, it has been observed that choosing a qualified employee by external agency conduct advertisement by agency and advert within the company followed by a shortlisting of workers that is presented to employees after that an interview is taken by the organisation, lastly they are recruited by the company.

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