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IELTS Writing Task 2 Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 1 Model Answer In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

IELTS Writing Task 2 Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 1 Model Answer In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question? RRwXM
In many nations, people have an increasing fascination with learning about the background of their place of residence. This essay discusses some of the motives for this as well as how people can unearth this kind of information. There are two main reasons for this phenomenon. The primary one is due to concern over potential building problems. By examining past records of one’s place of abode the structural soundness of the building can be determined. Moreover, many people like to verify that high-quality building materials were used. Another factor is due to curiosity. Many people wonder about who has lived in their house in the past and delight over the potential discovery of previous occupancy by a famous person. There are many methods to discover the history of a building. The most effective one is to check public records. From these records we are able to determine who the building was built by and blueprints of the structural integrity of the construction. Another effective method is to simply ask neighbours. In many cases, neighbours have been living in the area for a long time and have a wealth of information. Furthermore, houses in the same neighbourhood often share many characteristics. In conclusion, the main reasons why people are interested in discovering the background of their places of residence is due to concern over the structural soundness of the premises as well as a natural curiosity. The best ways to find out this information are to search public records or simply ask around the neighbourhood.
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can unearth this kind of information.

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building
problems. By examining past
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records
of one’s place of abode the structural soundness of the
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building
can
be determined
.
Moreover
,
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people
like to verify that high-quality
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building
materials were
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wonder about who has
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in the past and delight over the potential discovery of previous occupancy by a
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famous
person.

There are
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many
methods to discover the history of a
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building
. The most effective one is to
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check
public
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records
. From these
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records
we are able to determine who the
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building
was built
by and blueprints of the structural integrity of the construction. Another effective method is to
simply
ask
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cases,
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have been living in the area for a long time and have a wealth of information.
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houses
in the same
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neighbourhood
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share
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characteristics.

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, the main reasons why
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people
are interested
in discovering the background of their places of residence is due to concern over the structural soundness of the premises
as well
as a natural curiosity. The best ways to find out this information are to search public
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records
or
simply
ask around the
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neighbourhood
.
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IELTS essay IELTS Writing Task 2 Cambridge IELTS 16 Test 1 Model Answer In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

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