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companies are making profit

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Businesses have always aimed to make a profit for their investors; therefore, to society as a whole, they should not be held accountable for the environmental and social costs of their business. I completely disagree with this should not do anything for the environment and society. It is well known that companies are aimed to accumulate wealth to obtain financial advantage to what they are doing. What I mean here is that the priority of any entrepreneurship, I suppose, is coverage of its running costs, like employees and employers' salaries. Also, companies need to invest in technology besides their cost of living. I am sure that investments would maintain the improvement of the enterprise's welfare, what is more, it will popularise and increase the business rating. To put it in other words, companies can help the development of society through investments, through which the company will attract other investors and grow up to its profitability as well. On the other hand, firms should not run up their incomes. They can account for the environmental and social costs, although this can be afforded by companies, in most cases, having sustained financial condition. Businesses could use a proportion of their budget to support local charities and environmental projects. Such actions can be maintained by the state and taxes can be diminished for this company. So, company bosses are to contribute to society and the environment. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account we can say that it could be favorable to pay attention to both socio-environmental and their financial goals.

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Businesses
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make
 a profit for their investors; therefore
, to society as a whole, they should not be held
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costs
 of their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
. I completely disagree with this should not do anything for the environment and society.

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companies
are aimed
 to accumulate wealth to obtain financial advantage to what they are doing. What I mean here is that the priority of any entrepreneurship, I suppose, is coverage of its running You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
costs
, like employees and employers' salaries. Also
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
 need to invest in technology besides
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cost
 of living. I am sure that investments would maintain the improvement of the enterprise's welfare, what is more
, it will Possible spelling mistake. 'popularise' is British English.popularize
popularise
 and increase the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
business
 rating. To put it in other words
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companies
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the development of society through investments, through which the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 will attract other investors and grow up to its profitability as well
.

On the other hand
, firms should not run up their incomes. They can account for the environmental and social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
costs
, although this can be afforded
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
, in most cases
, having sustained financial condition. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldworkemploymenttrade
Businesses
 could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 a proportion of their budget to support local charities and environmental projects. Such actions can be maintained
 by the state and taxes can be diminished
 for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 bosses are to contribute to society and the environment.

In conclusion
, taking everything mentioned into account we can say that it could be favorable to pay attention to both Possible spelling mistake found.
socio-environmental
 and their financial goals. 