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in the past people did things with hand but now with machines

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Technology has provided people with the best appliances making their lives much easier than ever before. This phenomenon seems to have few downsides, resulting people are more vulnerable to health hazards these days; however the benefits of this boon, has provided people with comfort and they can utilize the time in other productive works. Undoubtedly, people are more dependent on the gadgets to get their work done in fraction of seconds. To wash clothes or cook the meals, there are number of machines that can get work done without any efforts. This dependency on these gadgets have made people prone to diseases. According to one of the surveys conducted, it was found that in the past where people had to do the household chores without any assistance of the machines, involved a lot of physical activity but now this scenario has changed. People have become lazy and sitting for the most of the time, has made them obese making them prone to numerable disease. Despite the above, the advantages the technology has served to the mankind cannot be overlooked. Now, the machines are fully automatic and it will not be wrong if I say them visual machines. These are quite easy to operate at any time and any place. This has provided people with a lot of convenience. They can easily get the things done whenever they want and that too at any hour of the day. To understand this with the help of an example, women are able to do many things simultaneously, they can wash clothes with the help of washing machines, wash their utensils using dishwasher etcetera. That too without any attempt. Moreover, this has made them save a lot of time. Many homemakers are able to pursue many other activities with getting things done easily without wasting much time. To conclude I reiterate that technology had made things available to the people making their lives easy. This research has many disadvantages though, but the advantages such as ease and cost effectiveness that it has provided people with, cannot be overshadowed.
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before
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people
are more vulnerable to health hazards these days;
however
the benefits of this boon, has
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provided
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comfort and
they can utilize the
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time
in other productive works.

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,
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people
are more dependent on the gadgets to
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get
their work done in fraction of seconds. To wash clothes or cook the meals, there are number of
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machines
that can
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get
work done without any efforts. This dependency on these gadgets have made
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people
prone to diseases. According to one of the surveys conducted, it
was found
that in the past where
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people
had to do the household chores without any assistance of the
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machines
, involved
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a lot of
physical activity
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now
this scenario has
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changed
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have become lazy and sitting for the most of the
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, has made them obese making them prone to numerable disease.

Despite the above, the advantages the technology has served to the mankind cannot
be overlooked
.
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Now
, the
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are
fully
automatic and it will not be
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if I say them visual
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. These are quite easy to operate at any
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people
with
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convenience. They can
easily
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the things done whenever they want and that too at any hour of the day. To understand this with the
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of an example, women are able to do
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many
things
simultaneously
, they can wash clothes with the
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help
of washing
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machines
, wash their utensils using dishwasher etcetera. That too without any attempt.
Moreover
, this has made them save
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a lot of
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time
.
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Many
homemakers are able to pursue
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many
other activities with getting things done
easily
without wasting much time.

To conclude
I reiterate that technology had made things available to the
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people
making their
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lives
easy. This research has
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many
disadvantages though,
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the advantages such as
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and
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cost effectiveness
that it has
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with, cannot
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IELTS essay in the past people did things with hand but now with machines

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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