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Communication is becoming much easier and more convenient between people worldwide, but more people are lacking social skills.

Communication is becoming much easier and more convenient between people worldwide, but more people are lacking social skills. r8bo2
In the present, communication has changed and developed faster than in the past. It is a neccessity for negotiating, studying, as well as for anything else. Therefore, people around the world must have good communication skills and their social skills should improve all the time also, such as: social skills adjustments in new social surroundings, meeting people and creating good relationships with them. There are people who still lack social skills and skills to communicate by person, both face to face and on social media. They should begin with word expressions and behave themselves to adapt to people worldwide. For example, if you must change to work at a new company, you will encounter new places and colleagues. Social skills are a necessity for communicating with people. So, we have to try to be confident, friendly, and smile at all times.
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skills
and
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skills
to communicate by person, both face to face and on
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social
media. They should
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begin
with word expressions and behave themselves to adapt to
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people
worldwide.
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, if you
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must
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to work at a new
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company
, you will encounter new places and colleagues.
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skills
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people
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IELTS essay Communication is becoming much easier and more convenient between people worldwide, but more people are lacking social skills.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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